What an intense day! I engaged in some very good exercises and resources to analyse, it was a thoroughly enjoyable day. The man who came in to look at my project so far gave some very interesting feedback and advice specific to my video and planning. He highlighted throughout the day that the picking of a genre and showing the conventions of it is a key thing to include, which he said I had done very well. The scene with the phone call, probably the trickiest part of the video to film, did have some problems though. He suggested that I re-record the voice of my actress on the phone because it sounded like she was in the same room as the rest of my actors. There was also an issue with the music I had chose, he recommended something more blatant in terms of connotations in the song, something poplar which would be obvious to any audience watching.
One other point he made, is that because of being the camera man and editor you are more likely to hesitate with cutting unnecessary footage which to you looks essential, but to other people seems pointless. This is the main idea I took away from the enrichment day as I think it is key in selecting the right shots to use, and affects the overall outcome and meanings of the video.
Another key point he made was that it is essential to keep the audience interested. Well that’s pretty obvious you may say, but actually to keep the audience hooked and wanting to watch any video you must entertain them sufficiently throughout the duration of the video. To do this you must diversify your styles with different camera angles, and interesting effects, all in the name of producing quality video and keeping the video actively interesting.


